The main focus of 2011, for me, is to write short fiction: short stories, novellas, twitfic, and flash. But, like any aspiring writer, I do have a few novel-length ideas outlined somewhere on the computer (in notebooks, scribbled on post-its—you get the idea).
So, I will take a break from short-story-land today, in honor if Absolute Write’s February Blog Chain, to describe one of my antagonists.
But, there’s a problem.
The person isn’t really an antagonist—not in the classical hero vs. villain sense.
I prefer, therefore, to think of this character as “a curious person whom my character wishes to better understand.”
We’ll call him, for the moment, Mr. O. B. Scure:
He is tall, slender. His face is fine with sharp edges and sad eyes. You might note, upon meeting, that he is androgynously handsome. His clothing: fitted jackets, silk shirts. And yet, you would not like to encounter him in the dark. He is a mystery: speaking little, in a rich voice. Its gentle heat like the hearth of a large, forgotten manor.
Also working on the AW February chain gang:
Go visit them!
Also, here is PART TWO of the challenge.

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February 12, 2011 at 5:34 pm
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February 25, 2011 at 6:32 pm
Diane Dooley
Mr Scure is certainly very mysterious. Did you do the vid? It really enhanced your description.
February 25, 2011 at 8:36 pm
C.H.
Yes, thanks! My addiction of the week is hypercam and drawing software.
February 28, 2011 at 4:05 am
Claire Gillian
That was a unique take on the blog chain. Well done. I love seeing these time elapsed artworks, like the video done for Gail Carriger’s steampunk cover. Fascinating to watch.
February 28, 2011 at 3:40 pm
C.H.
Thanks! The chain was fun, I hope there will be another for March. Blogging is new to me on AW, forgive me if this sounds a little like a kid getting off a carnival ride screaming, “YEAH LET’s DO THAT AGAIN!”
March 1, 2011 at 4:37 pm
alexp01
Holy crap that’s an awesome vid. Wish I could forgo a prose description in favor of something so visceral, but it would wind up looking like a rejected panel from xkcd.
March 2, 2011 at 5:16 pm
C.H.
Thanks! It’s probably cheating to throw up pictures to go with the words. Really, I just wanted to sneak in the screen capture video. It’s so ridiculously cool to be able to do that. That was my inner geek screaming, “Look! I haz tek-know-low-geee!!” <— lolcat style, of course.
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